Feed back on my editorial pages

after my feed back on both my editorial pages i have decided to make changes.The image on my first editorial Piccadilly gardens needs to be more brighter this is because the image as it is right now looks to dull and it dosent stand out also i have decided to crop the background image and make it smaller this is because at the moment when looking at my editorial page the main focal are the pigeons, also i have decided to change the colour of the letter r on manchester this is because the letter just blends with the background and its to hard to see and finally i have decided to add a box at the bottom of the page so i could add my text in it and plus i have decided to add an equal margin throughout my double page spread.

Final Double Spread for the 4 statues

after the feed back on my second double page spread i have decided to change the background colour it dosent work also the images are not leveled the margin and grids on the first spread dont match this one.

Final double page spread on Piccadilly Gardens

This is one of my final double page spread i decided to use one of my own photograph of Piccadilly for the background the reason for doing this was so my spread doesn't look dull and boring. i also created the word Manchester Firstly i sketched the word in my sketchbook and i then scanned it in and used Adobe illustrator to create this using the pen tool. 

First Editorial piece

i am not sure if my first double page spread looks right but this is what i have done and i am going to carry on until my double spread is finished.

Double page spread layouts

This is my first idea i came up with on the computer i think i am doing the right thing but am not sure???

Primary resource Pictures i took around manchester