Feed back on my editorial pages

after my feed back on both my editorial pages i have decided to make changes.The image on my first editorial Piccadilly gardens needs to be more brighter this is because the image as it is right now looks to dull and it dosent stand out also i have decided to crop the background image and make it smaller this is because at the moment when looking at my editorial page the main focal are the pigeons, also i have decided to change the colour of the letter r on manchester this is because the letter just blends with the background and its to hard to see and finally i have decided to add a box at the bottom of the page so i could add my text in it and plus i have decided to add an equal margin throughout my double page spread.